Loved it! From reading the comments above, I love how you wove personal traits into this story, because I would have never guessed that those are reflections on you/your friends. 🙂 Your use of dialogue/dialect is excellent, and I love that you’re using your talent for the Lord’s glory. Keep writing, girl!
Proverbs 31 Teen 
Ha. That was amusing.
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I was laughing almost the entire time I was writing it.
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Looooooove it! Haha–me and my obsession with red hair. XD
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Me and my obsession with bacon…
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Haha!
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Congratulations! I have nominated your blog for the Wonderful Team Member Readership Award. You can find information at: http://rachelcarrera.wordpress.com/2014/03/11/wonderful-team-member-readership-award/
Best wishes!
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Thanks so much! 🙂
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Loved it! From reading the comments above, I love how you wove personal traits into this story, because I would have never guessed that those are reflections on you/your friends. 🙂 Your use of dialogue/dialect is excellent, and I love that you’re using your talent for the Lord’s glory. Keep writing, girl!
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Thanks so much! I actually didn’t mean the redhead obsession part, that was the only reason I could think of why Mac would kidnap Douglas. 😉
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redhead obsession? Am I going to be kidnapped? 😛 I cook pretty good bacon too…;)
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No, you have nothing to worry about… from me, at least. 😉 😆
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